yetanotherjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Garnet speedpaint]

Excellent work.

megadrivesonic responds:

many thanks

[Mario calamity]

Perhaps some sound effects would have added to the animation. Also, don't be afraid to edit the sprites, or create new poses, as I think it would liven up the characters a bit. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

link5019 responds:

Hey thanks. It's been a while since I've touched flash so I thought it would have been not so great but I'll keep that in mind next time!

[The Argo App]

The animation is very well done. The textured colors were a nice effect. The lipsync looks a bit strange to me, not with the timing so much as the positions of the mouths, but it's a minor thing.

Don-Jackimo responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the style. Hmmm... I do like to do pretty extreme poses with lipsyncing but maybe I should tone it down. Thanks for taking the time to review!

[Carlos 'n Jenkins Ep. 1]

Could turn out to be something nice. The drawings are nothing to complain about. I know what you said about the lack of humor in this episode, but the dialogue came off as a bit strange, although you might end up fixing that in the future as well.

RoboProdigy responds:

What would you say needs the most work, writing, delivery, editing etc.?

[Stick Dicks Episode 1]

The pacing is slow, and you see jokes coming from a mile away.

PsychoZoid responds:

Thanks for the review. I will improve on the jokes next time, I will promise you that.

[oFFICE hUMOR]

I suppose your description summed it up pretty good. The dialogue was delivered well, though, considering the material.

JenANDJake responds:

Thanks for being honest mah man - Jake

[Truth About Roommates Ep7]

This reminds me a bit of my experience.

CartoonCoffee responds:

I'm glad you were able to relate.
Thanks for the comment!

[Zombie Bunny Adventures]

Very impressive animation work. A play button would be nice, it kind of just stops at the end and plays sond.

Full2D responds:

Hi there thanks for advice, I've just added "replay" button.

[Babies- Episode 4]

I don't really know what to say. It seems like you put a lot of effort into this. However, for the next thing you make, I would focus more on making sure the story works out. I couldn't really follow this. Perhaps storyboarding would help as well. It was disorienting seeing characters come from nowhere and having apparent scene changes when the background remained the same. You seem like you have potential, so I hope to see new and improved stuff from you.

JamToonz responds:

Yeah, I didn't storyboard this episode, and that was a hinder for me. However, the following episodes of this show, I wil be focusing on the plot, and the next episodes have a more followable plot, in my opinion. Some of the problems with the animations were due to the fact that I rushed on some parts of this, such as the backgrounds and body animation, and voice acting, and I cut out several parts of the script so that I could get the episode done quicker. Also, in the next episode, I hired more voice actors and writers, so that'll help, hopefully. Well, thanks for saying I have potential, and my friends have said I've improved quite a bit since the first few episodes of this project! :)

[FAT-ASS trailer]

Animation quality fluctuated throughout. Not bad at it's best. The humor is kind of lacking, as a lot of it seems to just be directly from the movie being spoofed.

CHEAPTOONS responds:

I was a ware of the quality of the film due to fact NEWGROUNDS still can upload my swf file, so I had to download the film through youtube converter