yetanotherjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario hates Mario Maker (short scene)]

The character animation is pretty good. I can't say for sure without seeing the other parts, but I feel the humor of this may have been a bit stronger as part of a bigger movie than it is on it's own.

FleetAdmiralTony responds:

Im just treading the waters a bit here, but ill be sure to make it much more longer with more stuff to watch, my minimalist brain prevents me from doing so lol, thanks though <3

[Fox Dance Animation | PDX Dance-Off!]

Simple, but effective. The design and shading on the fox are nice, and the pencil and paper style works well.

jessejayjones responds:

Thank you John! :)

[If Tony was a Weatherman]

This is a good start for a first submission. The voice acting is well done and clear, and the animation could use a bit more polish, but it gets the job done.

CrewOfAwesome responds:

Thank you! I aimed to make it kind of animatic-ish, except for the lip syncing :D But thank you very much for your criticism, that helps a lot :)

[The Bubbles' Parade]

Very nice job! This turned out pretty solid. Simple designs, but it's easy to read their thoughts and expressions. Sound design is nicely done, too.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Thanks!

[My Part Of The Collab]

It's okay, but why upload it seperate from the rest of the collab?

RB responds:

One word:Promotion

[Tomatoe Clock]

"why u open ol wounds"

In all seriousness, it's okay, although the volume was a bit uneven.

HarrisonWyrick responds:

yeh, i sadly figured that out right as i was half way through animating it
but dont tell nobody about it, not even your dad

[Milk]

It is kind of short. My main problem is that without any other ocntext, I'm not really sure what the joke is supposed to be. Is the milk sour? Was the second guy not supposed to be drinking the milk out of the carton? Why shouldn't he have drank the milk?

sketchysketchist responds:

There is no context. Only zuul!

[A Descent into Euphoria]

Not bad. I thought the father's dialogue at the end seemed unessecary.

JayTheDoodler responds:

yeah your right, i re uploaded it to YouTube without that part, cheers
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOmJs5OkfMA

[Scaredy Cat]

Not bad, but very short and not much happens.

I'd like to see you guys make something longer... maybe convince your cousin to make an account here?

Megacharlie responds:

I would but she doesn't have flash.

[Yotam & Fantasia 12]

Not bad. The animation is stellar as always. The characters seem to allude to it, but the public access thing is kind of grinding this show to a halt. Also, when the video goes to the credits, a new tab opens automatically to another of your videos, you might want to fix that.

LazyMuffin responds:

whoopsie. ill fix it.
the public access thing is here because i like seasonal arches, there really is no need for it. just a change of setting to help me improvise. and the fact that it's taking an incredibly long time is a part of a joke that will never pay off.

thank you for the comment!