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yetanotherjohn

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Very smooth. The use of changing 3d perspective was fantastic. Very fast pace, perhaps add some pauses to allow for some breathing room if you rework this. If you want to finish it, maybe you could do the ending in another file, then render both into one video file, and add music.

Animation seems promising, but pacing could use some work. The voices aren't bad, but it sounded like you were trying to convey loudness while being quiet. Perhaps find a recording location where you can be loud, or find some stock scream effects for characters.

Kind of incoherent. Practice with creating a storyline, and maybe get some voices for your characters.

RogersEntertainment responds:

okay i understand what youre saying

Good, simple storytelling. Funny and inventive use and parody of sprite art and it's conventions. This was very nice.

Straightforward story (for as little sense as it makes), and nice, simple visuals to compliment it. Good job.

The stop-motion was great. Quite a bit of buildup for just that one joke, though.

It's okay for being made in five minutes. Glad you had fun...

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