yetanotherjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tomatoe Clock]

"why u open ol wounds"

In all seriousness, it's okay, although the volume was a bit uneven.

HarrisonWyrick responds:

yeh, i sadly figured that out right as i was half way through animating it
but dont tell nobody about it, not even your dad

[Milk]

It is kind of short. My main problem is that without any other ocntext, I'm not really sure what the joke is supposed to be. Is the milk sour? Was the second guy not supposed to be drinking the milk out of the carton? Why shouldn't he have drank the milk?

sketchysketchist responds:

There is no context. Only zuul!

[Random Halo 4 Pt.1]

The voice acting is actually pretty good. Can't say much about the humor, though. Maybe it could have worked as part of a bigger video.

[A Descent into Euphoria]

Not bad. I thought the father's dialogue at the end seemed unessecary.

JayTheDoodler responds:

yeah your right, i re uploaded it to YouTube without that part, cheers
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOmJs5OkfMA

[Poor Kid, literally]

The writing is alright. I feel that the art and sound could use improvement, and maybe bring down the movie as a whole.

[Urinal Buddies]

Orange guy didn't wash his hands...
Very nice job with the animation!

[Scaredy Cat]

Not bad, but very short and not much happens.

I'd like to see you guys make something longer... maybe convince your cousin to make an account here?

Megacharlie responds:

I would but she doesn't have flash.

[goku dies]

The art is good, but I knew where it was going the second the plane came on.

[Game Grumps Animated - Re]

Smooth animation and good layouts. Don't be afraid push the poses and expressions, they could really bring your work to a new level.

[Run In New Shoes]

Not a bad test. If you want to tell the story entirely through the visuals, though, I'd suggest cutting down on the use of text explaining the situation. Perhaps, for example, you could show your character taking the new shoes out of the box and trying them on. Otherwise, this was a pretty solid test.