yetanotherjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[What to do!]

I don't mind black and white graphics or stick figures. However, the graphics should be at least a little more polished than this. It should have sound, too. I'm not saying you need voices, just any sound at all would be nice. Finally, this would benefit from being more extensive in the choices you get.

[Popea]

Overall, it's a pretty fair movie, although the ending seems a bit abrupt.

[Garnet speedpaint]

Excellent work.

megadrivesonic responds:

many thanks

[Mario calamity]

Perhaps some sound effects would have added to the animation. Also, don't be afraid to edit the sprites, or create new poses, as I think it would liven up the characters a bit. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

link5019 responds:

Hey thanks. It's been a while since I've touched flash so I thought it would have been not so great but I'll keep that in mind next time!

[The Argo App]

The animation is very well done. The textured colors were a nice effect. The lipsync looks a bit strange to me, not with the timing so much as the positions of the mouths, but it's a minor thing.

Don-Jackimo responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the style. Hmmm... I do like to do pretty extreme poses with lipsyncing but maybe I should tone it down. Thanks for taking the time to review!

[Race?]

Not too bad, for what seems like an early effort. It holds a lot of promise for the future.

[Carlos 'n Jenkins Ep. 1]

Could turn out to be something nice. The drawings are nothing to complain about. I know what you said about the lack of humor in this episode, but the dialogue came off as a bit strange, although you might end up fixing that in the future as well.

RoboProdigy responds:

What would you say needs the most work, writing, delivery, editing etc.?

[Stick Dicks Episode 1]

The pacing is slow, and you see jokes coming from a mile away.

PsychoZoid responds:

Thanks for the review. I will improve on the jokes next time, I will promise you that.

[#savbraianduag]

Thank you for contributing a compelling commentary on the death of Brian Griffin.

[Google Responds 2 G+]

I suppose it doesn't say anything that hasn't been said already. Don't be too hard on yourself about it, though.