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yetanotherjohn

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I don't mind black and white graphics or stick figures. However, the graphics should be at least a little more polished than this. It should have sound, too. I'm not saying you need voices, just any sound at all would be nice. Finally, this would benefit from being more extensive in the choices you get.

Overall, it's a pretty fair movie, although the ending seems a bit abrupt.

The animation is very well done. The textured colors were a nice effect. The lipsync looks a bit strange to me, not with the timing so much as the positions of the mouths, but it's a minor thing.

Don-Jackimo responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the style. Hmmm... I do like to do pretty extreme poses with lipsyncing but maybe I should tone it down. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Not too bad, for what seems like an early effort. It holds a lot of promise for the future.

The pacing is slow, and you see jokes coming from a mile away.

PsychoZoid responds:

Thanks for the review. I will improve on the jokes next time, I will promise you that.

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