yetanotherjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yotam & Fantasia 12]

Not bad. The animation is stellar as always. The characters seem to allude to it, but the public access thing is kind of grinding this show to a halt. Also, when the video goes to the credits, a new tab opens automatically to another of your videos, you might want to fix that.

LazyMuffin responds:

whoopsie. ill fix it.
the public access thing is here because i like seasonal arches, there really is no need for it. just a change of setting to help me improvise. and the fact that it's taking an incredibly long time is a part of a joke that will never pay off.

thank you for the comment!

[Square - Gaming Historia]

Sorry, this isn't the type of video to post on this website. A show about gaming history is fine, but almost none of the images or footage were your work.

GeekyAnime responds:

Well, of couse the images or footage aren't mine, it's a video game history show.

[Character Animation]

The body language is fantastic. I think you met all the requirements for your assignment. While it wasn't the focus of this short, Winston's face seemed to lack emotion, compared to the tone of his voice. The lamp moving and object falling when he banged on the table were nice touhes.

Amylittlehands responds:

Thanks for your kind words, it means a lot. I do agree with you there regarding the facial expressions, especially towards the end of the clip. This is the first character animation I've done, so I'm always looking for comments! Will try and push more expression next time.

[Sausage Dog!]

The art is nice, though I wish sausage dog had done a bit more than play lumberjack and drop a log. Also, why is the last 10 seconds blank?

BrownProductions responds:

Shoot. We didn't even notice that. When we were reviewing it we only watched up until in says "Brown Productions"

[Poke-Nonsense]

I dunno... It just feels like there are a sea of pokemon parodies like this. While I'm not intimately familiar with the source material, I'm certain that this didn't have anything new to say about the franchise. I'm not sure it even said anything at all about Pokemon. You could've made fun of a wonky game mechanic, or some irritating plotline or character from the cards, or anime, or manga, etc.

Perhaps you were trying to make it more accessible to those who aren't fans of the franchise, but there wasn't any substance, nor was there any more than a superficial resemblance to Pokemon.

Art is okay, audio was good except at :06, a bit hard to make out there.
Keep Trying.

Deadtuna responds:

I wasn't fully trying to make it like the actual show or game. I was trying to basicaloly practice a style of animation but this is what came out. Sorry if it wasn't to your liking, but thanks for the input.

[Awesome Land (Episode 1)]

The characters in this are pretty likeable.
For future episodes, my only suggestion would to be to pick up the pace a bit, or add more music, as the moments without movement or sound could be a bit distracting at times.

Considering this is your first submission here, It stands out. It looks like the people involved in the production had fun, and put care and effort into the finished product, which is more than I can say for some people who post on this site. Nice work.

[Disney Gone Wrong: Sleepi]

Started out interesting, but had a pretty standard ending.

[Sonic Ex Pals]

Both parts were pretty funny, even though I'm not completely familiar with the source material. Tails sounds like Rob Paulsen at first.

kalabor106 responds:

After you mention it he really did sound like Rob Paulsen. Hehehe. Thanks

[Newgrounds.. More Like...]

It's not bad. You do seem to be improving from your first works. About the looping, you can download a preloader from this website, which only requires opening the file and reading the instructions on one of the frames.

[Random Ways to Serious...]

Having more sound effects could really make this much better.