yetanotherjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final War episode #03]

Sprite animations can be done well, but you really have got to push the boundaries with them. This just felt like I was watching someone else play a SNES game.

Marlon00X responds:

was not my intention to make the person watched the video like you're playing SNES

[Halloween *short*]

The drawings aren't too bad. It would be nice to have a preloader and play button. If the intention was to scare, you probably could have had the images pop up more suddenly, and have a more shrill sound with it.

AilieTheWolf responds:

i'll try better next time

[Waffles]

Pretty good for your first animation with the software. My only suggestion would be that the expressions look like many I've seen in other works. I think looking up "lackidaisy expressions" and seeing the deviantart result should provide some tips.

[BTT Minisode #1]

Pretty decent joke. Pacing and sound design are getting there.

[Broccoli]

The art is okay, and the voice is pretty clear. Overall, the humor just seems derivative.

[Burger Ninja part B]

Not much of interest happened with this. The video was full of artifacts/tearing. Sound effects would have been a benefit.

[run away hampster]

Kinda funny. A better microphone might help, or you could record in an environment with less echoing. The humor isn't terribly sexual or disturbing, which is a nice change of pace on this website.

flashmakeit responds:

Thanks for the review. I believe I need a new microphone.

[The Spaghetti Girl]

Hmm... Not sure what to say about the concept, but the animation was fantastic.

[Jargon]

Very, very interesting. I'm not sure what to say about this, except that you did a good job.